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Friday, 24 August 2012

Ata Barbecue Sausage

Yesterday Tuesday I was so happy that we were going to have some sausages for lunch as we were doing our work some of us were cooking the sausages and most of us were cutting the onions when we were cutting the onions we need to cut them into half rings when we had done that some of us looked like we were carrying.

As I went to look outside to see how the sausages were going I look at it and I felt like eating it because it look very nice when I came back to the class I went to finished my work I was so hungry that I wanted to eat now then the bell rang and it was time for morning tea I said yea time to eat my lunch.

As we were eating our lunch me and my friends said ‘’come let’s go now’’ so I want with them and walked around the school as I was walking around the school the second time the just rang so off I want to ICT I was so happy that some of us are going to have a sausage but as we walked into the music room the boys need to stay in there and the girls need to go to ICT.

I said to myself yeah we are going to be doing iMovie again I was so haveing fun doing that but too bad it was time to the music room as we walked out of the ICT then we all line up and wait for the boys to come out of the music when they all left we all just went and sat down on the mat then we started to sing one song and went to do our work on the computer after we done that we came and sang a song before we left.

When we finished the song we all ran back to class and sat on the mat when we sat on the mat Mr Marks said to go and get a piece of paper and try and find the answer when we done that we all went to get a sausage.

I wish that we would do it again after.   

2 comments:

Mr Chris Marks said...

Wow Ata, I think this is the most you have written so far this year.

You need to think carefully about when a sentence begins and ends as each of your paragraphs are one big long sentence. You need to edit your writing and add fullstops to show where each sentence ends please.

Come and see me if you need some help.

mafu faletanoai said...

hi ata! i love your bbq sausage story, yum! yum!
oh! and well done with your game at eden park! so proud of you.

enjoy your two weeks holiday
mafu

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