Our Share Lunch!!

Today I is the girls netball term share lunch. I am so excited for that I can't wait tell lunch time this to my second time having a share lunch it is one of the best thing about sport...I like to eat with my friends and so I can have fun at the same time I like my term because we are a term and we are all friends.

It is morning tea all most time for share lunch me and my friends went and played touch with my other friends we ask Miss Vaa'fusuaga for a rugby ball we ran on to the court and played the game for about ten minutes.After our game of touch we took back the ball back then we head to class....it was time for maths then we went to the ICT room and the others went to music.

After that it was time for lunch ''YEA'' I said in my head then we left we had a talk then we prayed for the food and that then we had to eat after an hour and a half we had an awarded for the hole term but...first we had to dance two at a time then it was my turn with Rave I was to shy to dance so Rave and I just stood there and watch then went up and said thank you to our couch Harry and Evet then we eat for a little..then our couch spoke to us about when is training then we left and said thank you  

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I am good at using something else instead of: Then, When, After to begin sentences.

I am not sure about using one key or main idea.

I am only going to focus on one main idea using a variety of sentence types and adding extra details. I am also going to edit carefully for punctuation and grammar.