Adding Detail To Sentences

W.A.L.T Adding Sentences To The Be At camp Beginning,Meddle And End. 

Bntzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach which was good  on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course which was climbing activities.

As we were on the beach  I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous because I didn't listen about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp because I have never done it before

On a sunny day We went abseiling.

We went abseiling because it was one of our activities

A Strange Noise

On a dark day there was no sun at all he was wondering what was going on? as he was walking towards the house where all the animals get sheared. When he was walking past the place he was looking around the house.

‘’Its changed’’ Bill said out loud to himself he kept on walking until he saw something he never saw before. He kept on walking just in case something bad happens he was so scared because he hasn't seen that before in his life he said.

Once he got to the end he heard something say ‘’Bill don’t go in there’’ Bill answered ‘’how do you know my name?’’ then there was no reply at all he was feeling a little bit sick not because that person it was because of walking a lot of time. He decided to have a long long rest in the shed he lay down and fell asleep.

When he woke up he saw the same thing he wondered what is going on when he walked he could hear someone saying ‘’Bill Bill come here’’ Bill looked around nobody then he left. ‘’HAHAHA’’ he heard Bill turned around it was his little brother Toby all along. ‘’So it was you all along’’ Bill said ‘’yes’’ said Toby.

At the end there was no problem and they didn't

need to solve anything also nobody got hurt. because it was Toby all along.

What Is It Like To Be A Farmer

The Accident

On a bright sunny day two boys named John and Jill went to check on the calves see if they were aright and still with there mother. John was worried because he heard a loud noise. He was wondering what is going on?.

After he checked both sides he went straight up the hill with the four wheeler he was going so so fast when he got to the top he was looking all over no animals at all so he drove away to find them.

He came back because he couldn't find them anywhere so he went back down he decided to have a rest for about ten minutes then he wanted to go back so he hopped onto the four wheeler and went down so fast and guess what!!?

He fell off the four wheeler right down and something cut him and when he got to the bottom he couldn't move at all because one he cut his leg and the four wheeler was on top of him out of no where. ‘’Help please help me Jill’’ out he came ‘’what happened?’’ Jill asked John had ripped and said what had happened.

Jill told mum and dad also and they rang the ambulance and they came about after one hour when they arrived they ask John what happened. John had told them then they raped his cut and he said a big thank you.

At the end John learned to never ever go alone by himself because that what happened when you go on your own.