Once upon time there were three little pigs. They were old enough to leave their home so they said goodbye to their mum.
The first pig who was not that clever. That he decided to buy some hay so he can make the hay as his house.
When he had finished building then along came a wolf who smelt bacon. So he came and said ‘’Little pig little pig, let me come in’’ growled the wolf. ‘’Not by the hairs on my
chinny chin chin’’squeaked the nervous piglet. ‘’Then I'll huff and I’ll blow your house down’’ said the big bad wolf then he ate the little piglet.
The second little pig who was not smart as well. He saw a man who was carrying sticks so he decided to go and buy them off him. Then he built his house out of sticks.
Then along came the big bad wolf the wolf said ‘’Little pig little pig let me come in’’ growled the wolf then the little pig answered ‘’not by the hairs on my chinny chin chin’’. Then the wolf said then I’ll huff and I’ll puff until your house comes down.
The third little pig who was the smart’s that build his house out of blokes which took a long time. He had a big long rest until.
Along came the big bad wolf then the big bad wolf said ‘’Little pig little pig let me come in’’ then the little pig said ‘’not by hairs on my chinny chin chin’’.
Then the wolf said I’ll huff and I’ll puff until your house will come down he huff and he puff but it didn’t come down so he went up the chimney.
Then he went up onto the chimney and went so fast into the boiled pot.
Then he came down and there was a pot with boiled water he went down then he jump into the boiled water and then the little pigs lived happily ever after.
1 comment:
Hello,Ata
Enjoyed reading your story it is amazing also I liked the picture it is cute, Also I liked how your complex sentences were colored diffrently and they were filled with detail I loved the way you put in some Punctuation in your sentences.
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