On a very nice sunny day a family went on a holiday they had everything they need .Then got into the car and left. It took a long drive to get there the kids fell asleep at the back.And then something happened at the back with all of their staff.
A dinosaur came out of nowhere and just in the front on the car and then the driver turned and hit the tree and rolled down to the bottom of hill and at the back of the boot all of their staff came out and when they hit the ground you couldn't hear anything then after a minute they can hear everything so dad told them to go back up the hill and try and find our staff.
They came back to dad and he was gone they couldn’t find their staff or dad then they called for help but nothing happend after that they went up the hill and saw a car coming!!..’’help they called help’’ then the car stop the person got out of the car and it was dad they were so happy and they ask a lot of question and dad replied I went to go and catch the dionsure.
They answered but how did you find this car he said I went up the hill and saw a toe track coming so I ask if I can use it and he said keep it so I said thank you and got into the car and left then I saw the dinosaur walking around and then I grab a rope tied it around him and put it in a classroom...so that is how it end and then they left to go on a holiday.
1 comment:
Some great ideas in this writing Ata but you really need to concentrate on your sentences. You need to read them carefully using full stops when a sentence ends. Some of your sentences are very very long.
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