One weird day at school we were all doing writing it was so loud then a few minutes later it suddenly it went quiet we all wonder why did it go so quiet then we stop and looked everywhere nobody was in room sixteen or seventeen then we all came back and our Netbooks was gone.
We didn’t know what to do? we went outside of class to cheek if anybody is here we all walked in a line we checked the field nobody we checked room’s ones to room twenty two we went back to class and then everything disappeared. Except for the computers we stayed in class until morning tea.
When I stood up my friends were there I played with them all morning tea but when the bell rang I went straight to class then they disappeared again. We needed to find out what was happening then we called for help he answered hi John is speaking who is this? Mr Marks we need your help everybody disappeared. John said okay I am on my way then he hang up we waited for an an hour then he came.
He entered inside the classroom ‘’he said what had happen’’ Mr Marks said everybody disappeared’’. ‘’What do u mean that is unbelievable nobody can do that how did it happen’’.
‘’We just doing out writing and it was so loud then it went quiet we checked everywhere but nobody was here it was just us then at morning tea they came back and when the bell rang they went away’’.
Let me fix it okay it was loud right yup that’s what made them disappear we have to be as loud as you can okay okay Mr Marks said to us you have to be as loud as you can okay in three one,two,three go
This is my writing sample that I did last week and I plan on editing it and posting again to show how good I am at editing my work.
