Reading Progression

At the moment I am at the red stage witch means I haven't been turning in my task at the right time. When it's Wednesday my goal is to turn in all my task at the right time so then I can move up to the orange level.

Rough Draft

The Spider is big and long it is very scary as you know. Its also a boy spider and it has long legs. It is a daddy long leg. Its a black spider with brown bright eyes.

Ata was so terrified when she saw a big long spider come out of the wardrobe. She didn't know what to do at that very second. Ata woke up scared once she saw the spider it was the scariest day of her life.  

Ata was so afraid of the spider because it couldn't stop following her everywhere she went. It was annoying. My family and I tried to stop the spider from causing a lot of trouble. The spider was annoying everyone.

When the spider couldn't stop scaring people we gave up. We couldn't get the spider out of the house and we couldn't solve the problem. So we just let the do what he wanted to do.

Pre-Writing a Nerrative

Reading Goals

Right now i'm at the Orange level. By next week I want to move to the blue level, my goals are to be better in reading and to complete some of my reading task. To reach my goal I have to get over 75% to reach my goal.

WW1

This song is written by George M.Cohan and is called Over There he is also the artist. It came out on 22nd of November 2009 and it is about WW1.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B6hRDS3LvQQ

My Goals

My goals this year

1. To work on my maths, reading and writing
2. Come to school on time
3. Treat people the way I wanted to be treated


My goals this term
1. Move up a level in all subjects
2. Focus in class
3. Go hard in sports

Letter to Mr Wiseman

Dear Mr Wiseman,

My name is Ata and I am 11 years old. I’m feeling very excited to start a great year to the term. I live with my Mum Dad older brother and my little sister. The memories I could remember when I was little was my first birthday. My favourite hobby is sports I’m good at stepping and touch. I have been to Tonga and I would love to visit Samoa. This year I am looking forward to sports. The best thing about Point England is that we get new sports gears every year.