Ata's and the hole school Disappears

One weird day at school we were all doing writing it was so loud then a few minutes later it suddenly it went quiet we all wonder why did it go so quiet then we stop and looked everywhere nobody was in room sixteen or seventeen then we all came back and our Netbooks was gone.

We didn’t know what to do? we went outside of class to cheek if anybody is here we all walked in a line we checked the field nobody we checked room’s ones to room twenty two we went back to class and then everything disappeared. Except for the computers we  stayed in class until morning tea.


When I stood up my friends were there I played with them all morning tea but when the bell rang I went straight to class then they disappeared again. We needed to find out what was happening then we called for help he answered hi John is speaking who is this? Mr Marks we need your help everybody disappeared. John said okay I am on my way then he hang up we waited for an   an hour then he came.

He entered inside the classroom ‘’he said what had happen’’ Mr Marks said everybody disappeared’’. ‘’What do u mean that is unbelievable nobody can do that how did it happen’’.
‘’We just doing out writing and it was so loud then it went quiet we checked everywhere but nobody was here it was just us then at morning tea they came back and when the bell rang they went away’’.

Let me fix it okay it was loud right yup that’s what made them disappear we have to be as loud as you can okay okay Mr Marks said to us you have to be as loud as you can okay in three one,two,three go


This is my writing sample that I did last week and I plan on editing it and posting again to show how good I am at editing my work.

My Best Thing

First day s school couldn't wait for school when I woke up I went straight to wash my face and get ready to go to school and when I got dressed for school I was sitting on the couch. Waiting for my sister to wake up.

When she woke up I told her to go and wash her face and brush her teeth then she went running off to the bathroom and came back walking to her room then she went into the room and got changed. When she finished we got out lunch and went to school when I got there I ran to the hall and sat down and waited for Mr Brut to tell us what class we are in. When he told us my name came up and I went and line up then I saw it was Mr Marks.

I said to him I got you again he said ‘’hahaha’’ we went off to class and then we went and sat down on the mat and he did the roll when we finished doing the roll we had to go and sat in Miss Garden class and she told us what to do so we all went off and did it. When we were done we and to go and sat back on the mat and listen to what Miss garden said when it was morning tea I went and sat down by my friends and eat my food. After I was done eating my food I went and played with my friends a few minutes later the bell rang to go back to class.

I ran back to class and waited for Mr Marks to open the door I just sat down and talked with my friends and then Mr Marks opened the door Mr Marks said “to make in a line” then he let the girls in first then the boys he said to go and sat on Miss Garden mat we all went and sat down when we were all there Mr S told us to draw what’s your favorite thing you have to write it on a piece on paper and we all went off and did what Mr S told us to do after a few minutes I went and show Mr S he said to colour it in.

I went to pick my colour blue,purple and green when I finished picking my colour I went to the place where I was sitting ten minutes later I was almost done but it was time for Lunch time I went to get my lunch then I went and and sat down and eat my food when I was done eating I had rubbish in my hand Mr S and Mr Marks said that we ain't allowed to stand up or you might pick up rubbish. When that bell rang I put my hand up and I waited for Mr s or Mr Marks to point at me so I can go when Mr Marks Pointed at me I stood up and went to put my rubbish in the bin and went and played with my friends.


After a one hour it was time to go back to class we went back to where we eat and then Mr Marks opened the door. We walked into the class we had to go and sit on Miss Grander mat.

At the end I love being in Mr Marks class.

Going to the park

In the weekend me and my brother went to the park at ten o'clock we played tag. He was in then my sister came to play with us and my brother tagged her then she tagged me then I tagged my brother and then he turned around to get me but he fell down on the ground.

We had to go back home and stay there after that I went to play games on the laptop for about five minutes then my brother came on and played the same game. that I was on for a little bit then me and my sister played games on the playstation, For about two hour’s.

After playing the playstation we watch tv then my cousin’s came over to have a barbeque with all my other family that came with a lot of food. After one hour or two we all went to grab a plate to eat and I hope that we can do this again.

Ata Netbook

What really frustrates me is when my netbook plays up and that tux paint can't copy and past.


I like learning with my netbook because it is better than writing with a pencil,I like learning with my netbook is way easier to tape on it,and is can correct you when you spell a word wrong.

My netbook would be better if tux paint can copy and past.

It was so hard to write with a pencil and now that I have a netbook is is more easier to do your work.

We can use our netbook better by not going on games, not taking picture.

Tevita jumping of a rock

On a nice sunny day Faioso family went to G.I because they need to go and cut their dad hair and the kids went to play on the rock’s because it would be boring to just sit their.

when dad entered the shop he went to ask the shopkeeper if this was the barber . Then the shopkeeper answered yes this is the barber shop. Then Evalu sat down on one of these chair and they started to cut his hair.

When the kids were playing on the rocks for five minutes Tevita fall onto the ground and hurt his leg. And that when Evalu came out of the barber and ran as fast as he could then when he got there he had to go to the hospital.

When they were driving to the hospital his leg was hurting more and more than when they arrived Faioso and Evalu had to help him walk inside. Then there went in and there had to go upstairs and there had to wrap his foot and then he went back home allgood

Going to the lawder

On a rainingOn a raining day mum and her son went to the lawder near Pt England school.

When mum got there she had stop the car and took one bag of washing and her son took the other pile of washing.

After that mum walk to the car the mum said to her son’’run run’’ off he went straight into the car.

When it was time to go and pick up the washing a man came and took her washing the man tried to stop him but he couldn't so he rain the police.

when  The man heard the sound of the police’s car coming all different direction then one of the police came to ask the man who owns the lawder ‘’what does he look like’’ the the man replied back he looks tell and he had black hair.

Off went all of the police then one of the police said to the other one next to him I see him then the man next to him said I see him two.After that talk both of them got out of the car then went behind and grab his  tshirt
and took the washing back to the lawder and looked him in jail  

What is it like to be a paralympics

Yea I said to myself we are going to be doing paralympics man I wander want it would feel like to become one of them so off we went to the count to try it out as we started we all went to go and grab a ribbon and put one hand in and the other hand out as we ran it felt strange because the ribbon was slowing us down.