Will.I.Am Message

I would like to say thanks to Will.I.Am for giving Manaiakalani trust $100,000.00

Hope you come back next year we love your music and we all appreciated what you have given to the Manaiakalani trust. 

My Graph

Today I have learn that the deeper go the warmer it get's.

What the.....?

Have you seen a shoe on a powerline?.I am sure you have but you haven’t seen a baby elephant on a rope tied to a powerline.What is going on......?

My cousin Jonita said to ring someone to help so we did the police came with a helicopter and the latter came down

and one of the police came down the latter and untied the baby elephant then Jonita was so happy cause it was her’s.

The wonderful washing machine

The wonderful washing machine

By Sharon Stratford

Insert photo of story here, taken with netbook.

Main Characters: Write here Wray and his Mum

Setting: It happened in the Bathroom.

Orientation: It was done in the house.

Problem: The Washing Machine broke.

Action: They put all their washing in the bathroom tub.

Outcome: When the bath was full, Wray stomped and swung and swirled the clothes till there were no more bubbly jets of soap.

Rippa Rugby

Rippa rugby is fun I like it because we get to play other schools and we won the hole thing the first game me almost lost but we draw a game with a school called panow.

They are very hard to play against and we played them in the finals.They were so hard that we almost lost to them but we keep on passing the ball out the two the two wingers.

We were so happy when we won I was so tired from running the ball.We are going to Eden Park we all ran to have some water and went to sit down so they can tell us who won and what place we came.

After that they told us who won and the mix term won we went to get wet and came back then we left to go back to school we got changed and just room eighteen had to go in the hall and played games.After that the bell rang and we got to go home.

Going to the pools

Today we are going to the pools for a swim it going to be so fun.We are getting ready to go to the pools.Me and my family are going about five minties later we were all finished getting ready.

We all got everything and put it at the back of the car we all go in the car and went off.It took an hour and a half to get there half way the car broke down.

We go out and we tried to fix it but nothing couldn’t help.Then a man came past and stop he got out of his car and me and my sister went and told my mum and dad.

Then he said ‘’do you guys need some help’’ and my dad said ‘’yes’’ he got out he tools and said can you hold this please my dad said sure he said thank you.He looked and the car we had to wait for about two hours.

Me and my sister went into the car and we fell asleep.When we woke up My dad said to hop out of the car.Then my dad tried to turn it on and it worked we said thank you for your help.

We got into the car and we went off we go to the pools.We payed to go in we were all ready got changed.into out togs we were swimming for a long time it was that best time with my family at the pools.We got home and I went to sleep.At the end I wish that we can do it again  

Ata's and the hole school Disappears

One weird day at school we were all doing writing it was so loud then a few minutes later it suddenly it went quiet we all wonder why did it go so quiet then we stop and looked everywhere nobody was in room sixteen or seventeen then we all came back and our Netbooks was gone.

We didn’t know what to do? we went outside of class to cheek if anybody is here we all walked in a line we checked the field nobody we checked room’s ones to room twenty two we went back to class and then everything disappeared. Except for the computers we  stayed in class until morning tea.


When I stood up my friends were there I played with them all morning tea but when the bell rang I went straight to class then they disappeared again. We needed to find out what was happening then we called for help he answered hi John is speaking who is this? Mr Marks we need your help everybody disappeared. John said okay I am on my way then he hang up we waited for an   an hour then he came.

He entered inside the classroom ‘’he said what had happen’’ Mr Marks said everybody disappeared’’. ‘’What do u mean that is unbelievable nobody can do that how did it happen’’.
‘’We just doing out writing and it was so loud then it went quiet we checked everywhere but nobody was here it was just us then at morning tea they came back and when the bell rang they went away’’.

Let me fix it okay it was loud right yup that’s what made them disappear we have to be as loud as you can okay okay Mr Marks said to us you have to be as loud as you can okay in three one,two,three go


This is my writing sample that I did last week and I plan on editing it and posting again to show how good I am at editing my work.